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You walked into the giant gymnasium, grumbling to yourself. You HATED p.e You had asthma so that made things worse. You looked around and saw everyone doing the warm up laps that you did everyday in p.e. You started running laps like you were supposed to, but then you ran and passed by the gym teacher. But not the normal gym teacher, this guy was. Really hot. ^ ^" You couldn't help but start walking instead of running, just staring at him... He wasn't fat, but you could tell he was an american man who spent his time at mcdonalds. You giggled and watch him check his clipboard to make sure everyone was present.

As soon as you slowly regained your ability to run instead of stalk the substitute, you realized everyone was done with their laps. You lost track of how many you had done since you were drooling over him... You overheard your peers and figured out his name was Mr. Jones. No sign of his first name, but it was a start.

Mr. Jones cleared his throat and started to speak to everyone. But to you, it seemed like he was talking and looking right at you. Which made you feel so great.

"Ahem... Alright dudes!! My name is Mr. Jones, or you may call me, 'the hero':D"

Yep. He was american. You could tell by the accent. But god was he adorable.... And he called himself the hero! How cute!!! You were totally gonna call him that now!!!

You were lost in your thoughts until he said 'today we will be doing pull ups on the bar'...You SUCKED at the bar. Sometimes you hardly even got 2 pull ups!! It was always embarrassing, but since you've had the same p.e teacher for 2 years you got used to it. But this time it was a sub, and a hot one at that... This was gonna really blow chunks. You knew you were totally gonna humiliate yourself, and you'd NEVER have a chance with him....Also-..

Your name was called. Damn time goes by fast when your thinking about sexy men!!..You sighed heavily and looked up.

"Uh...(first name and last name)....? Is she here today?"..You gulped when everyone pointed to you.

"Ah! There you are dude! You ready? Do you think you can do like,12 pull ups?!" He grinned and looked down at you.

"U-um...I-I can try...."You smile nervously and stand up, making your way over to the bar with him walking beside you with his clipboard. He nodded reassuringly.

"Just do your best bro, and ill give you credit. Kay?"

You nodded and stood up tall and gripped the bar tight, feeling your palms get sweaty and feeling nauseous. You were gonna screw up...

Surprisingly, you did better than usual. You did 6 pull ups. He grinned and chuckled.

"Great job dude!".. He wrote down your score then moved on to the next person.

~*AMERICAS POV*~
I tought to myself.....:'*Blush* G-god shes cute.... Shes..REALLY cute..... *sigh* This is soooo totally messed up!!! Im a teacher and I have a crush on my student!!! Pull it together bro, whats wrong with you, you pedo?!'

~*Le time skip to after p.e, and back to your POV*~
You were pretty satisfied with how today went. You had a hot gym teacher and you didnt humiliate yourself in front of him!

You reached for your bag. Perfect timing too. Just as you reached for your bag, Mr. Jones reached for his too. Your hands touched, instantly sending red flames up in your cheeks. On his too!!

~*AMERICAS POV*~

I blush. Thinking: 'Fuckfuckfuckfuckkkkkk.. TT^TT..Her hand...Is touching...M-mine..... O////O Stay calm bro....Youre a teacher, dont let her know your onto her...'

~*Lalalala BACK TO YOUR POV or whatever XD*~
You slowly grabbed your bag, and smiled sheepishly at him.

"U-um. So...Mr. Jones, are you subbing tomorrow too?"

He quickly pulled himself together. and nodded.

"Totally! You guys are awesome!" He grinned, and you giggled. With that, he blushed more.

"Okay!! W-well...Goodbye Mr. Jones!!" You waved and quickly ran out of the gym, him grinning stupidly.

He was madly in love.....With his student....?!
Hey guys!
This is based on me and my friends rp XD
For some reason I pictured America as a gym teacher ._.
Thus, the rp, then this!
Do you want me to make another part?? I think I will!
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:iconmy11hetalian2002love:
My11hetalian2002love Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
listen to lollipop while reading major blush
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:iconworldhetalia1551:
WorldHetalia1551 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
"Im a teacher and I have a crush on my student!!! Pull it together bro, whats wrong with you, you pedo?!"
I cracked up at the Pedo line XD
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rockprincessd Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Professional Photographer
More more more more more more more
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Chrissytude Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
But I can't even do 1 pull-up XD MISTAH JONES
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:iconangeliquediabla:
Angeliquediabla Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
I think I would love to see what happens next....
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:iconsteviequeen:
steviequeen Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome. 
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Paralizesthehedgehog Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
America: *watching me leave* 'mm, dat a$s~.

Me: What?

America: *blushing* Nothing! Nothing! Nothing at all! O///O



Awesome job~! XD
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
XD Thanks!
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:iconparalizesthehedgehog:
Paralizesthehedgehog Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(Credit to what Al said in the first place to Pewdiepie)

No problem. :3
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:iconyasminkirkland1031:
YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013
More!
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
There is more,sweetie.
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:iconyasminkirkland1031:
YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Thanks!
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Yup ^^
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:iconmister-pigcry:
Mister-PigCry Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconmoarplz:
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:iconanimeloverforlife3:
animeloverforlife3 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
YEEEEEEEEEEES MAKE OOOOOOOOOOOOOOONE
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:iconuntamed-rabbits:
untamed-rabbits Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
MY GYM TEACHER IS FAT AND UGLY NOOOOOO FAIR
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kittygirl1351883 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O///////O WTF you had to end it there???
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
There are more parts up!!!
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:iconkittygirl1351883:
kittygirl1351883 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
: D!!!!
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
Enjoy ;3
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:iconinklover198:
inklover198 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i realy love this
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:iconitaly-germany-japan:
Italy-Germany-Japan Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Please make another part, dude!
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
There are 3 parts up already,my friend~
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:iconitaly-germany-japan:
Italy-Germany-Japan Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry! Didn't see them!
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
That's fine!! don't apologize!!
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sorapuppy26 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
........i love this o__o IMMA WAIT FOR THRUSDAY WHEN I HAVE PE SO I CAN SEE IF I CAN HAVE AMERICA AS A SUB TEACHER :iconloveloveplz: C: (btw u never replied to my note :c)
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
LOL XD YAY And I know, I'm sooooo sorry!!! I was really busy :c :c :c
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:iconsorapuppy26:
sorapuppy26 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its okie ^~^ ! i was worried tht i did something to make u not respond haha ||D
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
No,you didnt~!!
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:iconsorapuppy26:
sorapuppy26 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
u sure D:
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
Yes!!!
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:iconsorapuppy26:
sorapuppy26 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha k^^
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stupidbread Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Good story! If I may give so constructive criticism;
You have a never nice plot and all, but I would stop putting the faces in the story. This is a piece of literature, not an RP. Your spelling is good and all, however your punctuation and grammar need some work. I'd suggest getting a proof reader. :)
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vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Alright. Thank you, I appreciate the feedback! I'll work on that. ^ ^
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:iconmurderedrum:
murderedrum Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
It's well written, and oh man did it make me laugh, you really pinned America's personality! I give it two thumbs up!!! 😆
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Thank you!
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AlexisRainbowKitten Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ong this is sooooo CUTE!! X3 I love it!
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Thank you so much!!
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missrainbowcookie13 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
I can't wait for part 2 :D
This is just SO epic
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
There is a part 2~
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GrampaRome2018 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
admit it Alfred was wearing shorty shorts haha but for real i wish he was our gym teacher the gym teacher at our school is old and has a saggy face
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
LOL XD
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:icongramparome2018:
GrampaRome2018 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
well both those things are true
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Yurri1234 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist
MAKE ANOTHER PART PLEASE! I really really love this~
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:iconvocaloid223:
vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012
Yay!
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Yurri1234 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist
^^
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Mikuada Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Student Photographer
Awwwwwwwwww man! This is awesome!
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vocaloid223 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012
Thank you!
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:iconmikuada:
Mikuada Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Photographer
No prob!
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:iconverovi:
VeroVi Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Please do a second part, or maybe even 10! Nah....too much, But you get the idea! :)
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